Her body was frail
But her smile was sweet
His body had aged
But his touch was loving
But her smile was sweet
His body had aged
But his touch was loving
Her hair a bun of snowy white
Laced with traces of black
His, a tuft all around
And a bald patch in the middle
There they both sat
In the cool of the evening
And in their silence, volumes were spoken
She’d smile at him
With the wrinkles forming on her face
And he’d kiss her cheek
And say something in her ears
This was a love time had seasoned
These were two who had become one
They’d passed through time
And time through them
And here I am standing looking at the both of them
Wait a second
that’s you and I
In golden years to come
(you is still a pronoun, one day it will be a name)
32 comments:
one word
BEAUTIFUL
M just so loving this, in d words of sparkle...BEAUTIFUL darlyn
lagbara Olorun.
Amen..."one day it will be a name..."
Beautiful words, Father this is my prayer as well
Nice..
It really was...
how are you..
i guess poetry like beauty runs in the family.
Lol nice post...it will be funny when you becomes a name.
Beautiful poem.good job mimi!
I would have to agree with you and say-Amen!
Reminds me of this song by Westlife:
"I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms..."
Really nice and simple.
Lovely post girl, how very nice and how very happy your YOY will be when he sees this! Thanks for the birthday wishes...God bless you!
YOU!*
So so beautiful...
Emm...how come you have hair and he has a bald patch? LOL...
Sorry...i am so silly
"They’d passed through time
And time through them..."
~mimi~ , I know great verses, WB Yeats, "When you are old and grey" amongst several. This poem stands right next to great works like that.
lovely! i could see them sitting on a bench out on the park... the sun setting... you will be a name... very very lovely
Ok, intriguing and full of suspence. Can you break it down?
Wasn't invited into your other blog? I'm sad.
*walking away in the rain, head down*
Nice post, looking forward to when YOU becomes a name, an AMEN to that. Howz ur week coming?
Lovely poem.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Hey Mimi, thanks for stopping by my blog. You have a sweet way with words.....God bless!
NICE ONE! really really nice!
when will you update, ~idol~?
çok güzel bir site.
awwww....beaurifullll...
lovely..
I hope u speak yoruba.. but..'tani mustapha senalp? e gba mi o, o fi comment si blog temi naa'
Hmmmm ... I guess I'm short of words
wow this is really moving na wa oh - me too i receive it AMEN
great poem jare - u shd meet my cousin damypoetry.blogspot.com
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Wonderfully graceful and beautiful. Very serene and touching. Leaves me with a warm feeling and now the only thing I can do is smile and dream.
Nice
Please update: )
I hope you are aight? Abeg juz take style update
update? e ba wa hupdate!
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